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in need of distraction
anything please
malfunctioning again
mind not at ease

breaths coming short
heart rate increasing
thoughts going nowhere
happiness decreasing

energy focused
on keeping from shaking
when will it end
insides are quaking

hearing is sensitive
imagining rings
no one is calling
anger this brings

emotions are plenty
sadness and hate
worry and discomfort
the hour is late

nothing is happening
no one is there
if nothing is wrong here
why should i care

can't do a damned thing
mind is shut down
lip hurts from biting
mouth is a frown

when will the call come
to make this all end
closure and comfort
so i can function again
This was written about three months ago. The sixth stanza (stanza yes?) is my favourite.
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l3th4l-l4dy Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2005
wow jos. that is a really great poem. i love it! and it rhymes, which makes it even more greater..altho its alreayd like super great!
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insider23 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2005
:P Haha, thank you Yen, dearest. :P
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